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Redundancy 冗词赘句

· tautology 重言

· pleonasm 冗辞

· verbiage 繁芜

· verbosity 繁冗

Wordiness 连篇累牍

· prolixity 冗杂、拉杂

· diffuseness 芜杂、驳杂、旁岔儿

· circumlocution 遁词

· periphrasis 绕语

1. 画了底线的冗词

AC

current

Actual

facts

Added

bonus/extra/increments

Adequate enough（2选1）

Advance

warning

And

etc.

Appear

on the scene

Ascend

up

Assemble

together

At about 6 p.m. （at或about 2选1）

6 a.m. in the morning（a.m.或morning 2选1）

ATM

machine

Attached

together

Audible

to the ear

Brief

summary

CD

discs

Christmas Eve

evening

Close

proximity

Close

scrutiny

Collaborate

together

Common

accord

Completely

unanimous

Connect

together

Consensus

of opinion

Cooperate

together

Consolidate

together

Crisis

situation

Debate

about

Dead

corpse/carcass

Discuss

about

Downward

plunge

Early

beginnings

Emotional

feelings

Enclosed

herewith/herein

End

result

Eventual

outcome

Famous

celebrity

Final

completion/ending/outcome/upshot

First

founded

Flat

plateau

Follow

after

Forward

planning

Free

gift

Fundamental

basis

Future

plan

Future

prospects

General

consensus

Good

benefit

Grateful

thanks

Hastily

improvised

Hired

mercenary

HIV

virus

Hopeful

optimism

Human

artefact (美式英语artifact)

Implied

innuendo

Important

essentials

Indorse

on the back

ISP

provider

Joint

cooperation

LCD

display

Meet

together

Mention

about

Merge

together

Mingle

together

Mix

together

More

better

More

inferior

More

preferable

More

superior

Mutual

cooperation

Natural

instinct

Necessary

requisite

New

beginner/beginning

New

creation

New

innovation

New

invention

Now

pending

Old

adage

Original

founder

Original

source

Outdoor

patio

Pair of

twins

Past

experience

Past

history

Past

record

Plan

ahead/for the future

PIN

number

Practical

practice

Present

incumbent

Previous

experience

Proceed

forward

RAM

memory

Raze

to the ground

Recall

back

Recur

again

Refer

back

Regular

routine

Relic

of the past

Remaining

remnants

Renew

again

Repay

back

Repeat

again

Resume

again

Return

back

Revert

back

Revive

again

Safe

haven

Self-

confessed

Share

in common

Share

together

Solitary

isolation

Spoken

dialogue

Sudden

impulse

Sufficient enough（2选1）

Temporary

suspension

Temporary

truce

True

facts/reality

Ultimate

conclusion/outcome

Unexpected

surprise

Unite

together

Universal

panacea

Usual

habit/practice

Visible

to the eye

Wealthy

billionaire

Widow

woman

Young

infant

2. 冗词赘句 · 连篇累牍

瘦身前 —— 瘦身后

After the conclusion of —— After

Apart from the fact that —— But, except

As a consequence of —— Because of

As a result of —— Because of

As yet —— Yet

At this point in time —— Now, at present

Be of the opinion that —— Think/believe that

Because of the fact that —— Because, since

By means of —— By

By virtue of the fact that —— Because

Due to the fact that —— Because, due to

During such time as —— While

During the course of —— During

Except for the fact that —— Except/but

For the purpose of —— To

For the reason that —— Because

In a majority of cases —— Usually

In all probability —— Probably

In anticipation of —— Expecting

In association with —— With

In close proximity to —— Near

In connection with —— About

In consequence of —— Because of

In excess of —— Over/more than

In less than no time —— Soon

In lieu of —— Instead of

In many cases/instances —— Often

In more than one instance —— More than once

In regard to/In respect of —— About, concerning

In spite of the fact that —— Although

In the absence of —— Without

In the amount of —— For

In the event of/that —— If

In the month of October —— In October

In the near future —— Soon

In the neighbourhood of/In the vicinity of —— Near, about

In the recent past —— Recently

In view of/In view of the fact that —— Because, since

Irrespective of the fact that —— Although

I would appreciate it if —— Please

Notwithstanding the fact that —— Even if

On account of —— Because of

On account of that the fact that —— Because, since

On a temporary basis —— temporary/temporarily

On a daily/weekly/monthly/yearly basis —— Daily/weekly/monthly/yearly

On condition that —— If

Owing to the fact that —— Because

Prior to —— Before

Provided/Providing that —— If

Regardless of the fact that —— Although

Subsequent to —— After

To the best of my knowledge and belief —— As far as I know/As far as I believe

Until such time as —— Until

With a view to —— To

With reference to/With regard to/With respect to —— About, concerning

With the exception of —— Except